by apixelaffair » Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:15 am
I tend to agree with some of the other comments about too much space on the left. Whitespace is good, but so is the rule of thirds and I think it can be applied with success here, especially since your theme is balance! You might consider shifting the split to the left so that 1/3 of the layout is the whitespace and 2/3 is the content. I think you will be able to keep enough whitespace between the illustration and the divider line, and I think you will find that your website feels more "balanced" than before! And in doing this, you're tightening up that space between the illustration and the menu, which may help to create more depth and drama (tension = drama). Killing two birds with one stone! Can't beat that! I love what you've done so far though and keep up the awesome work! Good luck!
For more information about rule of thirds, check out this handy SM article:
Divine Proportions/Rule of Thirds